- Video starts with AoP logo, talk about where AoP takes place (OK)
- Que in worldmap while talking about the core (why its the main place) (OK)
- Show faction bases 1 by 1, goals and enemies for each one. (OK, but season 2 and the changes that brings need to be taken into account. Why not have a video entirely on the factions and inhabitants of Phoenix?)
- talk about joining a faction with your character (Ok, but again. Changes need to be taken into account)
- Que in character sheet and talk about possibilities with SPECIAL, traits, tags, and different character possibilities and briefly describe changes compared to other FOnlines and new tags (That is more on the information video side of things I should imagine. It wouldn't serve to mention and compare other FOnlines in a trailer)
- communicating with other faction members, forming platoons, squads, and TS/mumble (Again, more of an information thing rather than a trailer)
- show player scavenging while saying why its important, player gets into a firefight with enemy faction members. NPCs backstab enemy faction while saying core is dangerous place. (Love it)
- Show arsenal of weapons with different abilities and purposes (Would this not be best for a video of its own?)
- Que in ZC video from GM perspective while talking about fighting for dominance in the core, show map from pipboy while constantly changing colors (Again, Love it. Especially the changing colors)
- ZC leaderboards and legendary weapons, talk about why PvPing is beneficial (Information)
- For PvErs, talk about dungeons to do, show roleplayers ingame/forum (And again, information)
A trailer really doesn't have to go into some of these things.
It needs to set a mood and give a small glimpse of what to expect and tell people where they can find it. Being vague is sometimes the best option as over facing players with information is bad. (Especially the ones that are new to FOnline)
Buzz words like "Phoenix", "Core", Factions (And their names) Should all be said as much as coherently as possible
Ever heard of the mic trick? The trailer for the division uses it to great effect. Its basically players talking in game but in a scripted manner. So imagine were wandering the core and chatting about what we see, where were going and why. Then the enemy shows up and we have to chat all tactical and, well...act basically.
Sure, its not organic but it sure would beat
"Move Stem you're blocking the door"
"Fukin Ramon, dont let Ramon escape!!"
"Fkin Swarmz"
"Cri now. Cri now you sad bastard"
You know what I mean? I don't mean to step on your ideas I'm just trying to offer honest help.
The only reason I suggest some of that be left to a video of its own is because adding all that will add a large amount of time to the video and if you were to split it up, you can spend the amount of time each topic really deserves.
And again, Season 2 must be taken into account. Or run the risk of all the effort put into making the trailer wasted by it becoming outdated.....Future proofing! That's it!